Can you please give me feedback on my new sales page?

Thanks guys. I do apologize. The site is down. I am not sure what is going on. Am contacting my hosting server to figure it out.

If you ask a question, then there should be something to show so that people can answer.
Forbidden

You don't have permission to access / on this server.

Additionally, a 404 Not Found error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request.

You should probably fix the site so that it doesn't report a 403 error...! :o(

Thank you Warren. It is a blog. I had some sales page text that I was referring to. I took it down because I searched copyscape and someone had copied every bit of text from my page.

I know you are still working on it, but I would add some graphics. For example you tell about APSense and provide a link as the heading, but putting a small graphic or banner at the bottom after your review will get more clicks. I would also question the use of WordPress if you are not going to blog? A static website to convey the same information is faster and less prone to hackers and spammers.

@Jatin Patel, you just gave me feedback by saying that you don't like it. Some people are just rude. @Felikss, there is nothing on the blog yet. It is a new site. I had a sales page up but I am editing it and refining it to be a little more to the point. Thank you tho. I do appreciate the feedback guys!

Only I see this error "404 — Fancy meeting you here!"?

No, I cannot give you feedback on your new sales page, because i Do not like your page.

Nice, it looks fresh and more modern than other sales pages in the past.

Looks fresh and clean, however you should have at least a logo and an image of some sort would also be good.

I was considering shortening it. Maybe just a "right to the point" list. Thank you for your feedback!

the idea is well described, good images and product. However is a bit extensive and takes a while to read all.